Friday, May 25, 2012

The Girl with a Broken Soul

A story written by : Ismail R Raslan

Once upon a time , there was this beautiful lady , Hair is black as stone , eyes as blue as the sea , skin as soft as the sand. Her only defect was a strange left ear.
She developed the ugly habit of tilting her hair to the left to cover it up. Afraid from rejection, she never reveled this to anyone.

She lived what she called , a normal life.

Fell in love with an architect , and things were going sweet as a summer breeze. Madly in love , all what she can see is her architect.

A man who seemed as the perfect caring guy.

Later she started to lose weight , became pale. Out of concern she seeked medical advice.
Later was diagnosed with cancer ! !

She started to lose weight ,her black beautiful hair and her astonishing grace .

And her architect’s fragile love faded less and less every day , shallow as he was it showed more and more each day.

Then finally he saw her ear , and acted like scum of the earth. And left her when she most needed him.

Broken ! And heart broken.


She chose solitude in her fortress.

One day going to the hospital for her chemo. Weak , broken , and in pain. With her harry potter cap on , to hide her lost hair. Sees a very charming man a head of her , her heart raced. A strong wend breeze hits hard , and her hat flies away.

She almost died from shame.

The man runs behind her hat. Struggles to get it.
And gets it !!

Walking back to her , all what she can think about is , “ he's going to ask me if I have cancer , if I'm sick , what should I say , should I run “

He looks her in her eyes and tells her , are you a harry potter fan ?! About to answer !
He shouts with a serious face , team harry of team slytherin ? She says slytherin .
He replies back , mudbloods are lame aren't they !?
We should kill them all , and put the school back in action.
Release the dementors of azkaban !!

She laughs , like she never did before , first time in years , she actually felt happy , even for a split second , she felt warmth in her heart.

Someone actually cared.

He took her in her lowest. He valued her for who she really is , what was inside her soul.

As he was a well known doctor, he had many connection , and was able to put her in a clinical trial for her cancer.

The fight for cancer wasn't easy.

Yet he stayed with her , he helped her past her worse. And past her Cancer !

As happy as they both were , after her treatment , she grew beautiful again , he loved her more and more each day , to him she was an angel on earth .

He loved her soul before she grew up to the angel she is now in his eyes.


THE END

8 comments:

  1. what an amazing story , I love it so much .
    I really teared up when I read " Later was diagnosed with cancer ! ! "
    Plz write more stories ,

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  2. A Broken Soul that you brought back to life.
    BEAUTIFUL !!

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  3. Very nice Dr.
    you always surprise me .

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  4. I Loved it when you said , Broken ! And heart broken .
    you have your way with words .

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  5. Id love to be loved by a guy like that , few decent men like that actually exist in our ugly world.
    Im sure the great Dr.Ismail is one of them.
    You make the world a better place.

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  6. Iv read this 4 times so far and i can't get enough of it .

    Bro , can't wait to see you !!
    I don't care about your internship , you have to come we are missing you here like crazy !!

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  7. your're really a bad person I hope u know that ;(

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  8. Creative as always Dr.Raslan. Glad to be back to reading your blog now that I'm done with finals.
    Your story reminds me of the saying "Once in a while, right in the middle of an ordinary life, love gives us a fairy tale"

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